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I want to ride a horse through the rain
If it helps
Wash away the scorns I give myself
No one has to be perfect
But if some of this filth stays
It will grow onto me

I can breathe in the rain
With the power of four hooves
I can call over the hills
And fall back from the thunder in response

Just take a moment
To redirect the wind and capture the lightning
I'm not a farmer of storms
But they fill my harvest of words
And make buoyant my blood
As passion is bled onto the books

I will take a steed and ride
Through the rain
Soak my coat and shoes
So I can come home
And taste a little warmth
:iconaloisebrennan:
Wrote this on the bus. This lady was staring at me the whole time I was writing...kinda creepy.

Also inspired by a song of the same title: [link]
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~Kereth-Midknight Feb 8, 2013  Student Writer
It's only by aiming for the bulls-eye that we manage to hit the target at all. (RE: First stanza) *nod sagely* Another concoction of well-strung metaphors. Nicely done!
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~AloiseBrennan Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) It's mostly derived from a short scene in the movie Mansfield Park, which is quite literal to the passage.
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~RiseAgainstOppurtune Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Rain. A wondrous inspiration, I've found.
Amazing imagery, keep it up.
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~AloiseBrennan Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
GAH, thank you again! :D
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~RiseAgainstOppurtune Jun 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha. Don't think on it. ^^
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