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December 24, 2012
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I don't care what kind of flowers you give me
Or how cheap the chocolate is
I don't care if you comment on my outfit
Or take me out to fast food

But if you make me laugh
And I feel honest with you
If things just make sense
Even when nothing rhymes

Then I might stay a while

If our dates can only be held
At a convenient laundromat
Or helping in a soup kitchen
Or donating blood

Then I can believe we're real

Still, if you take me across the breeze
And let your body be swallowed in shadow
So you can sing to me from the dark
And walk into my nightscape effortlessly

Or ride through my gale
And dry the salty sea a hundred times over
Simply to wrap me in sugar and fire
If you could exchange my eyes for yours

Then I can't possibly go on without you
:iconaloisebrennan:
I couldn't resist making a Dr. Horrible reference :D I do like frozen yogurt!
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Mood: Affection ~LunaRaeB Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh darlin, how I love your written work. <3 I love the Dr. Horrible reference too. xD
I do love this piece though. I speaks to me, and I can relate to it's words. :: hugs :
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~AloiseBrennan Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :) I'm glad you like it! :hug:
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Sorry Penny,

You're too far away :(
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~AloiseBrennan Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww :) Well, that's alright! Thank you, you made me smile :D
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And you inspired me to write about valentines day... In my scrapbook: [link]

It's not that happy as yours is :)
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~malcomblack Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is beautiful
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~AloiseBrennan Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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