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Simple attic form
A pirouette in this twisted fashion
Mind set flawless
Gut flowing between the veins of right
Despite the bridge to the north
The left hand knows not its place
And my shadow hides on the bookshelf

Flapping hearts heads words around

and yet she sees nothing
no danger strangles the ankles
foreign bits yes but those claws do not consume
are there eagles circling the fire

Spin and walk in a straight tape
Stand back oh foul texture of metal
Thy poison doth not sting my breast
You know it is all air over fingers
More like a tightrope act

swift is a chair upon the face
to boil in hate and swim in the mire
no sacrifice suffices for the truth quite
simply as the ballerina turns to paper

He cannot bear to knock in fear of flying backwards

These cards are on strings
Being pulled by a horse and buggy
Led by skeleton in a top hat
Eyes scorching green
Armani suit of the first prototype
More like a robe swathing like a murderous shroud

Hear the bees in your ears mutter accusations
Declarations of war to create peace
So unholy the lion has been made
We stand as lemmings before a chess board

Simple attic form
Do not retaliate in anguish
It is only the silly demeaning thoughts of men
Hoping to scope out the depths of the sea
And the edge of heaven
Only to prove that they choose not to believe in their own existence
Before the child of fire and water laps out of their tray
Spitting it back with vengeance
Redeeming the sickness with its own disease
Crushing the mouth of the snake by fist
Wearing the skeleton inside by will
Driving forth a chariot with a whip for all the blame and deeds
Of bypassers who keep knives in their closet and guns in their step

Dance in your best clothing to burn
Walls of frothing shadow
Consume stars gone gray
Cream of justice flacked by sorrow
Life dying in birth as a tale ends in song
A word to the apprentice
All is misunderstood
Yet all shall come to pass in truth
:iconaloisebrennan:
I had to write something. I sat down and just started spouting words, regardless of coherence and meaning. I decided that it didn't have to be about me. Not all of my poetry has to be. It made no sense at all to me, and I honestly don't know what all of this means. But I know that for someone out there, it will be perfectly understood because it was rather meant for them. Just that odd feeling that I needed to write, and someone will need to read this and something will come out of it. No idea who you will be and what it will inspire for you, but whoever you are that needs to see this poem and can decipher the true meaning behind it, thank you for giving me something to do for fifteen minutes :)
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~xx5killar5xx Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really enjoyed this one, had my head going in circles. Great Work!!!
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~AloiseBrennan Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I guess it's okay to have your head going in circles for a bit :)
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:iconxx5killar5xx:
~xx5killar5xx Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! ;) and just love how it has you thinking through out the poem.
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~AloiseBrennan Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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~xx5killar5xx Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
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