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So this morning I felt like a crab with too much sand stuffed in his ears

And I wanted the salt of the ocean to just pour from my face

I lugged these pounds of sand tied to my hands and feet

Like a hot air balloon without a course

I was drowning in my own air, ungrounded

And I had somehow swallowed my fist as I went through the numbing motions

It seemed like I couldn't handle the little things
I was plaguing myself with my own pain
And the angry syrup flowing through my brain was like
A diabetic low on sugar, yet it was thick with the stuff

When you can't imagine climbing out of your heartbroken cell
Time seems to run all tortoise-like
Everyone hares in circles about you
Neither dream nor nightmare nor wake is your wake

In truth joy and discovery is simply slumbering a little longer

Peace works so hard that his muscles are fighting the lactic acid inside

Because the reality is

Peace can't exist without lots of pain

Without all of that, none of this purity could exist

The soundtrack stolen from the clouds could not have been written



Don't let it break you heart, the greatest sorrow you've ever had
You will lose the many opportunities around you by remaining sad
I was this little hermit a few moments ago, deaf to the sea
Let's just say chance and curiosity have a way of changing me
:iconaloisebrennan:
This isn't just for me. This is for anyone who thinks they can't get out of whatever they're muddling through. It will take you time to figure out what defenses are needed to combat the storm, but as long you remember that if the tunnel has a dead end, just Hulk-smash you're way through the other side. :)
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~Kereth-Midknight Feb 13, 2013  Student Writer
Excellent use of transitional metaphors as usual. With "your wake" were you thinking in terms of waves or funerals, I wonder? Or leaving the ambiguity to be navigated by the reader?
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~AloiseBrennan Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Your wake" is literally just meant for when you are awake :D
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~Kereth-Midknight Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
Aww... but there's so much possible double meaning there :( :( :(
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~AloiseBrennan Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, well that's only what I meant it for. You can interpret it your own way. Poetry is meant for that :D
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~MaryandJim May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What great impersonation, metaphors and comparisons! Cool!
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~AloiseBrennan May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconawwwplz: :iconthankyouplz:
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